I really like the texture of the clouds, and the sloppy-yet-complete look to the sky. I feel like the right side of the picture might be a bit cluttered if you add in the girl (even though I do like that idea). I think the raindrops would distract from the "The Windy City" concept you have. That's a gorgeous picture of Chicago, by the way. Sorry I couldn't help more
One piece of advice, get rid of the words. If you have the words Chicago it looks like it will be sold in an airport gift shoppe. People will know that that is a pic of Chicago.
I like the idea, but Kyle's right the words seem kind of out of place with the rest of the pic, and it can already be assumed how the girl's situated with her dress flowing and everything that it's the windy city. But i like the city, and the sky looks awesome though, I like the reds and greens you added in! Awesome job
I also like the picture better without the raindrops/balloon. It's a good idea but I think that it leaves too much white space and takes away from the awesome sky that you painted. Other than that it looks good and I love the picture of the city that you chose; great job!
It looks great so far. I agree though that the raindrops/words will be distracting. Just a suggestion, I think the girl balloon idea is real cool and to incorporate the windy city type message I think it would be cool if somehow you intertwinned the two and made the city look like it is moving in the wind like a ballon attached to the girls string.
Ilove the colors you used in the sky. They compliment each other very well. I also like the whole idea of your collage. The texture of the clouds are good!
I really like this piece! The textures you got in the clouds are amazing. I do agree with everyone above that the words are distracting and I don't really think they are needed but otherwise I love it!
My dearest Shae, I think your ideas define who you are in terms of artwork. I think you're doing very well doing what you're doing. I can tell you know what's up. You don't really need my advice besides to keep doing what YOU want to do, (it's YOUR artwork) if you wanna keep the letters or not I think you should do what you want to do in terms on showing the right message. Good job girl.
From Adi: the Chicago piece looks really good. i think that the girl was a really good idea and reminds me of the girl on that salt can. if anything needs fixing it would be the "Chicago", i think if you added to t a bit more it would help a lot
I really like the texture of the clouds, and the sloppy-yet-complete look to the sky. I feel like the right side of the picture might be a bit cluttered if you add in the girl (even though I do like that idea). I think the raindrops would distract from the "The Windy City" concept you have.
ReplyDeleteThat's a gorgeous picture of Chicago, by the way.
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~Cam
One piece of advice, get rid of the words. If you have the words Chicago it looks like it will be sold in an airport gift shoppe. People will know that that is a pic of Chicago.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea, but Kyle's right the words seem kind of out of place with the rest of the pic, and it can already be assumed how the girl's situated with her dress flowing and everything that it's the windy city. But i like the city, and the sky looks awesome though, I like the reds and greens you added in! Awesome job
ReplyDeleteI also like the picture better without the raindrops/balloon. It's a good idea but I think that it leaves too much white space and takes away from the awesome sky that you painted. Other than that it looks good and I love the picture of the city that you chose; great job!
ReplyDeleteIt looks great so far. I agree though that the raindrops/words will be distracting. Just a suggestion, I think the girl balloon idea is real cool and to incorporate the windy city type message I think it would be cool if somehow you intertwinned the two and made the city look like it is moving in the wind like a ballon attached to the girls string.
ReplyDeleteIlove the colors you used in the sky. They compliment each other very well. I also like the whole idea of your collage. The texture of the clouds are good!
ReplyDeleteI love the girl with the balloon,the first one looked like it was missing something but i think its really cute. You have some really nice textures.
ReplyDeleteI really like this piece! The textures you got in the clouds are amazing. I do agree with everyone above that the words are distracting and I don't really think they are needed but otherwise I love it!
ReplyDeleteMy dearest Shae, I think your ideas define who you are in terms of artwork. I think you're doing very well doing what you're doing. I can tell you know what's up. You don't really need my advice besides to keep doing what YOU want to do, (it's YOUR artwork) if you wanna keep the letters or not I think you should do what you want to do in terms on showing the right message. Good job girl.
ReplyDeleteFrom Adi: the Chicago piece looks really good. i think that the girl was a really good idea and reminds me of the girl on that salt can. if anything needs fixing it would be the "Chicago", i think if you added to t a bit more it would help a lot
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